The grass is green

The grass is green

A Poem by Nick.B
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Don't know what this is....too much boredom?

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The grass is green,
but I am rotting away,
day by day,
using a .45 will surely end this delay,
but "the grass is so very green"
I need to see it, until the end of my fear.

Drinking and betting can substitute a .45?
I don't know for sure,
but really can make you say
"the grass is so very green today".

© 2013 Nick.B



Author's Note

Nick.B
Some lines put together, not sure what this is, maybe too much time, boredom etc...

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Wow, this is heartfelt, Nick. Excellent write. I hope all is well. Mr Dunne.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Oh wow, this is so emotional but beautiful. I liked this, thanks for sharing. Don't get your hopes down, everything will turn out to be fine in the end, believe my friend, believe!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Nick.B

3 Years Ago

Thanks, I appreciate it
I like it. its emotional and heartfelt. I can just feel your emotions in this poem.


Posted 3 Years Ago


The grass will be white soon...:)................

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very well put together, an enjoyable piece, great to read some of your poetry again ;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nick.B

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it :D
Drinking and gambling....two addictions that can surely lead to an early demise as much as a .45 can albeit more slowly. We need to see that green grass and realize there is lots to live for....lots to experience before giving up. I liked this. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nick.B

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it
I guess boredom can produce some good writes sometimes I guess...Bravo

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nick.B

4 Years Ago

Thanks Sami
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welccome...:)
I can envision chaos flying around your bubble as you sit in a pretty field on a sunny day... and there is inner turmoil, fighting depression...

I can truly relate to this piece.. well penned, Nick! ~xoxo~

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nick.B

4 Years Ago

Thanks Robbie :d
Robbie~xoxo~

4 Years Ago

It's my pleasure, Nicky. ;)
What I liked about this one was the honesty. I think you have shined a light on something that many of us have felt in times of despair. It is always better to remember that even in the darkest of nights, the sun will eventually shine. Technically, perhaps this one could be cleaned up a little bit -- the flow was a bit choppy in the end, but I did enjoy the concept and the honesty, which created an emotional impact. Pen on.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nick.B

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it the review

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