Arrows against Humanity

Poetry, a poem created by nicholas Dykstra and yumna karim. Feedback is appreciated.

Arrows against Humanity
By:Nicholas Dykstra
&
Yumna Karim


Arrows of brutality attack our fragile society,
From the negativity it has caused a tragedy.

Life is precious and desperate so tread lightly,
Many have been struck by arrows of insanity.

Created by man the arrow is designed purposely,
Deflecting these arrows can be catastrophe.

In order to maintain our sanity,
We need to fight to bring out the positivity.

For it's also a mankind's gift
To spread discord and enmity

Arrows of brutality attack us, coming ever so near of ripping our hearts apart.

What is the purpose, one may ask
Except to render them incapable of humility.

Life is precious and desperate, so tread ever so slightly.
Hear the anxious cries of dying humanity


Nicholas Dykstra©2016
Yumna Karim©2016

Author's Note

Feedback is appreciated thank you readers for your time.

Reviews

[Kesha]

A wonderful piece Yumna! I don't believe i have ever read this one :P

[Enigma Monster]

Beautiful and full. This is a very well-rounded poem. With each new line, a new thing to ponder was born. Loved it.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you! This means a lot ☺

[Nickdykstra]

Wonderful working with yumna karim on this , great work and scores 76/100 on literature scale. Thank you for everyone's help.

[Valentine]

Very much said in this write. Life is precious and we need to treat others the way we want to be treated. Valentine

[Nickdykstra]

@Valentine, thank you very much. Appreciate the review and time reading our work.