Lost

Lost

A Poem by Nicole

I scream because I'm not heard.
I scream because I have no freedom.
I scream because it is the only way I know to express my feelings.

No one listens to the voice in the corner;
No one pays attention to the shadow they have shunned.
No one notices.

I am trapped in a box, and I am mute.
Please see my bloody tears and hear my silent cries.
Please drive away the shadows that have swallowed me.
Show me the light. Be my knight. Be mine.

© 2009 Nicole


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i really like this poem and i can personally relate to it. it's terrible feeling ignored/invisible, and sometimes the only way you can be heard is by letting out your sadness and anger.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The second verse seems a little awkward, but I love the third!
Good job, Nicole. Keep writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is full of desperation. Raw emotion. The plea at the end is truly what brings this piece of writing together. That there is hope for redemption brings life and fullness to this poem. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 30, 2009
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Nicole
Nicole

Ft. Lauderdale, FL



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My full name is Nicolette Garmini Elise Ramsingh. I'm a proud person, sure some of the things I do may be bad. Maybe even stupid but, hey. Its my life. :) I love my friends to death. And I'm just .. more..

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Snappin'. Snappin'.

A Poem by Nicole