The Loss

The Loss

A Poem by Nicole Renee
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For the loss of my work and everyone else's work that got unfortunately lost on Writerscafe.

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Half my heart been torn out,
My soul is crying from the pain.
Everything that was there
Has vanished in the front of my eyes,
Not knowing about it until now.
I used to blind, yet I can see again.
The other half is irreplaceable,
Not being able to mend it back together.
Hopefully, there will be a new light;
A new road to step upon.
But for now, the sorrow
Will not fade away,
And the scar will be upon
My heart for what
Feels an eternity.

© 2008 Nicole Renee


Author's Note

Nicole Renee
I know that everyone is pissed off about the lose (I know I am), but I'm really hoping that I'll be able to create more (and possibly?) better stuff, even though what I had was what I liked. It hurt me so bad when I found out because I poured my soul and heart into every single one of those poems and I know I'll never get them back (I know everyone feels the same). I feel shallow for talking about myself, so I'm sorry. ^_^



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I'm glad you didn't spend this piece blaming Charlie. You simply stated that you missed your work.

Good ol' Nicole :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


thank you for your sweet poem of remembrance to all who lost their work here at the cafe. i too was a victim. good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


You can really get the feelings being envoked in this poem.
It made me feel her emotions which is always good in poems.


Posted 16 Years Ago


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RHP
Just curious why the only copy of one's work would be posted? As for the poem: My heart for what would
Feel like is an eternity. = My heart for what feels an eternity. Good to let these feelings surface so no blocks develop.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Nicole Renee
Nicole Renee

Anoka, MN



About
I usually write poetry and short stories, yet I always come up with good ideas for novels. I did have a long biography on here,but when Charlie deleted everybody's work off of here on Friday the 13th,.. more..

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