My Last Breath

Another haiku

Dying in your hands
I can't seem to see the light;
Please save me from death.

 

Author's Note

I'll probably be writing a few more haikus' because I enjoyed doing this one and my first one 'The First Time'.

Reviews

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i REALLY like this, i really like the italics, wow, after reading it for the 3rd time i just realized u could be talking about seeing the light to heaven OR the light of our world....AMAZING write