The Fake Reality

 

Simple, but tasteful.

Lovely, but blurred.

Why can’t anything be
Clear as the blue sky above my head,
And why can’t I see the bluffed

From the formed reality that’s in the front of me?

Maybe I’m just being too wishful;

The thought of it being too much to bear for my mind,

And the delicate smells and images forcing me

To realize that I might be dreaming,

 Or that I might be awake.

 

But who knows what might happen

While I walk this empty road in my mind.
There may be a fork in the road, or a silent end

That’s being traveled along side in my mind.

 

Author's Note

It's been forever since I've written something, so I hope you like this piece. :]
I got inspried by Unbreakable by Fireflight. They're an amazing band!

But anyways, this is something that's been on my mind off and on.

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Reviews

[Perry]

Yah, I really enjoyed reading this, I especially liked the Flow. Beautiful lil excerpt from your mind, I'll have to see and read some of your other pieces of writing :)

[Jonathan Ballam]

I like the last paragraph in particular. The rest will need some re-working and maybe try and bring in stronger images. Start reading poetry, that really helps by unconsciously loading up your brain with beauty and words!

Keep writing ;)