Endless Sky

Endless Sky

A Poem by Aurora .I.
"

Something I wrote recently.

"
Endless Sky
 
He won't turn
Refuses to learn
Won't progress
Seems to only digress
Just a little game
Always the same
Can't comprehend
Can't understand
Why? Why! Why?!
Just open your eyes
And you'll be surprised
See how much endless sky you have
Don't keep saying "I don't give damn!"
Look at what a good mother you have.
Not that f*****g father who you've never seen
Who's never seen you as a human being.
Brother, my brother, my dear, dear little brother
Our mother did not put up such a fight for our lives
For you to fight back and not want this life
So stop thinking you have the goddamn right!
You have no diamond rings,
You are not a f*****g kind
You have no jewels
We don't live under your rule

© 2012 Aurora .I.


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Aurora .I.
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I love your meter. It varies, but consistently. Nice work! And here are a few more words so I can get one more point for this review. Lol.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very powerful wording. All in all an intriguing piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 22, 2012
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