Hold On

For all in despair

Here here, the raindrops fall,
Consuming a world that is,
So cold So cold.

Here here, tears as a bleach,
Drenching colors,
Out like a leech.

Here here, emotions run low,
so low you despair,
not willing to go.

Here here, you have to hold on,
To life, to everything,
You thought was once gone.

For everyday is new,
A fresh page of your life,
Don't let it get broken,
Flowers so few.

Hold on to hope,
To love,
To freedom.
To a feeble dove,
Reflecting what's within.

 

Hold on. Hold on,
Two words that I say,
To you, to me, to everyone,
Who feels no more May.


Hold on, my dear friend,
For once your mind bends,
You'll find in mirrors, a smile,
That brings everything to mend.

Hold on.

Reviews

[MOON]

Very good , like the line " who feels no more May"

[LunarSong]

Pretty, I like how it's encouraging and not just depressing. Everyone sometimes just need to be told to hold on.

[Trish D.]

motivating and encouraging. my favourite stanza was the second. Thanks.

[emma]

powerful and i really liked it :) the words flowed nicely together.

[特殊]

I love it

[Night]

@Tandi: Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it! And, I've already fixed the spelling errors. :)

[Tai]

Amazing, Something that everyone feels, nice use of words, couple spelling errors, but nothing too major. Loved these words: "Hold on. Hold on, Two words that I say, To you, to me, to everyone, Who feels no more May."
Nice poem, keep writing! :)

[kjsa]

Wow this is amazing. I like the "Here here you have to hold on" on part.