The Government

The Government

A Poem by RaynesMelody
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Hopefully no one will take offence to this poem, it is my oppinion therefore it doesnt mean that everyone else has to agree.

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Power and corruption

rolled into one.

These foolish mortals

who reach for the sun.

Dare they help the

weak or poor?

Will they open

every unlocked door?

 

How can I explain

my hatred for these,

corrupt indeviduals

whos hearts will freeze.

Whether they'll change,

who's to tell.

But I hope that these people

will rot in Hell.

© 2010 RaynesMelody


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I like this poem. Good to see other people watching the men and woman with no concern for the real world. Power and corruption is strong and alive. Simple cure. Less government and less lawyer and career Politicians. Nice flow of thoughts and a very nice ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like this poem. Good to see other people watching the men and woman with no concern for the real world. Power and corruption is strong and alive. Simple cure. Less government and less lawyer and career Politicians. Nice flow of thoughts and a very nice ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This made me chuckle. The rhyme scheme is fluent, the message is clear, this is a fun and easy read. I really enjoyed it. Please join the Raving Ranters group and add this so I can feature you! ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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RaynesMelody
RaynesMelody

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"If it were not for hopes, the heart would break." I'm not one for spoken words... but when written, or sung... I can never seem to shut up. more..

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