My Symphony

My Symphony

A Poem by RaynesMelody

If you feel that I speak much too freely

Perhaps you havent really got to know me

Because to understand the words I speak

You have to find what's underneath

 

My heart is not laid bare to see, whilst

Your ears are closed to my symphony

If you think that you are living the life

Then you truely haven't explored inside

 

When you ignore these strings that pluck

This life you live can begin to suck

Your mind's more complex than you can guess

And your heart is willing to bear the rest

 

Tomorrow brings many a new sight

It's up to you to see blessing or blight

So until you hear my symphony

My heart will not be bared to see

© 2012 RaynesMelody


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I like the desire of this poem. The words are true. We must listen and try to understand the special people in a life. No weakness in this poem. I like the strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Speak as freely as you need my love, a great piece, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 29, 2012
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RaynesMelody
RaynesMelody

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"If it were not for hopes, the heart would break." I'm not one for spoken words... but when written, or sung... I can never seem to shut up. more..

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