This Is The Time I Drink Of You

This Is The Time I Drink Of You

A Poem by Nipplegrinder
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**EROTICA** Contains Mature Subject Matter

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The satin straps still tied to the bedposts
The silken shimmer of sunrise
Dancing on the gooseflesh
The gentle fan wafts simple breeze
Upon each curve and lock
The matted hair and
Ruined eye makeup
The faint smell of candles
Having been extinguished
The scent of leather
And surrender
And your breath's cadence
In exact rhythm
With the warbling robin
Beyond our den
This is the time I drink of you

© 2017 Nipplegrinder



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beautifully painted... the morning of desire and the forgotten nights tale told very well..
the satin straps are very alluring ;)


Posted 2 Months Ago


Great imagery created from just a few stanza's.
I'm imagining the bedroom scene almost as if I'm the little robin watching on in the cool morning air.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

3 Months Ago

Thank you! I'm pleased you enjoyed this!
Smoking Man

3 Months Ago

My pleasure
Beautifully written. I love the imagery; I can really see the picture that you painted with this poem. I especially love the last line. My only critique is that it is devoid of punctuation. Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

4 Months Ago

Sorry about the lack of punctuation. Proud of the lack of punctuation.
Gee

3 Months Ago

Rosie is bang on. A clear image painted and steamy thoughts of what led to these images. Shows that .. read more
Nipplegrinder

3 Months Ago

Thanks, Gee. I truly appreciate that.

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