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Where's My Daddy?


A Poem by Juanita

 

Mommy,
Susie’s parents are married
And her dad lives with them.
David’s parents are divorced
But his dad visits him.
 
Janet’s dad has,
“Gone to a better place,”
But her mom says he’s still here
Even though they can’t see his face.
 
Tasha lives with just her dad,
And they’ve never had to be apart.
And all the other kids at school
Have a dad who loves them
With all his heart.
 
But mommy,
I don’t have a father
To call me, “daddy’s little girl.”
I don’t have a dad who cares for me
More than anything in this world.
 
I don’t understand
Why my daddy is gone.
Please,
Tell me mommy
Did I do something wrong?



© 2008 Juanita
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My dad dumped me when I was 10.
This one has really hit home, It doesnt hurt to read it though because...well, ya gotta move on.
The things that the girl in this poem is saying, I understand how it feels and I've asked myself the same damn questions a million times and more.
Until one day...ya gotta learn...its HIM and not YOU.

Fucking awesomely written, you know what its all about.

Well done, and a BIG thanks for past reviews.,

GBG - Leah

Posted 3 Years Ago

4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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