My Heart

My Heart

A Poem by Nix
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A little something that speaks for it self.

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If hearts could speak
my heart doth beat
a thousand beats for you,
and if all is lost
my heart doth stop
for silence speaks the truth.

© 2009 Nix



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Sorry. I didn't realize you were posting here. This was really good though. Sad. Your heart stops beating for her because she isn't communicating? Or is you heart not beating because all is lost. I think this is really intriguing. Did you send it to her?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow, I really loved this. Even though it was so short- it was so perfect. You got your point across, really well.

"and if all is lost my heart doth stop
for silence speaks the truth."

Simply loved the ending of it. Beautifully done.

Chloe.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Nix
Nix

100% British!, United Kingdom



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Hi, my names Nic, better known as Nixie on the popular writing site called Booksie. I've been using the site for a while now and decided to venture out a bit. I'm planning on posting the best of my ol.. more..

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