Beauty

The truth about realizing your own beauty

You will never know how beautiful you are. All you see is a dull and unsatisfied face in the mirror. You don't see yourself like I do.

I see your eyes light up when you laugh, your lips curve like a winding road as you smile, I see your heart pound and your spirit cascade when you do something you love. I see you joyfully dance around the room on your toes and hum to your favorite song.

I have seen you break free from tears and battle past the demons in your head.

Darling, let me write a novel of the way you walk and the way you talk. Let me use words down to a simple letter to describe the essence of your being. Then tell me you aren't the most wonderful person to ever walk the planet.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is appreciated

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Interesting write! I adore the words... some deep thoughts are cracked with your opened--heart. Every line I read became my fav. and so interesting to read with the time. Some of your great thoughts make me lost in thinking of this world ... about its love it serves to all of us, like how diplomatic it is with the "Humming" of silence when the nights overcome the lights & love starts rushing through whole body to body. I`d like to say, this write`s very--very thought provoking!! Great job!!

[Rishabh Goel]

A beautifully framed poem. Immaculately picked up words make it adorable.good work

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. Each of us need someone to give us positive thoughts and words. I like the positive energy of the poem leading to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Vita Rose]

Great inspiration for someone in a deep depression or insecure. As if a loved one is attempting to convince someone of their worth.
My favorite quote "let me write a novel of the way you walk..."
Amazing

[CurtHobbs]

Great way of dishelving a lot of thoughts some have about their worth. There is definitely some deep thoughts in your words. I look forward to reading more of what you have to offer

[Jana Furstenberg]

Love the last para. Some words tend to add some cheese ;) But overall, it's a good piece. Keep writing. I'd love to read more.