Coffee tears

Cappuccino foam in Montreal puddles

In my cup of hopes is just rain

Rain

Gleam of fishy smile in your eyes… and splashes

of jazzy-joy sounds struggling my pain

Pain

Just a friend chat, drama-free, Polaroid-type reality

Banal coffee talk, no complaints

Rain

But why is my bare soul in the network of humanity

Lost and found in your hands?

Pain

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good coffee and sadness. At least you are not alone. I like the tale in the poem.
'Just a friend chat, drama-free, Polaroid-type reality
Banal coffee talk, no complain"
Ending made the poem complete. Rain allow the sadness to become one with life. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[emmajoy]

Two scenes, two poems, two sides of the emotional coin put within a wrap of fine and unusual style. Strange, but i can almost hear a voice saying these words, over and over..

'Just a friend chat, drama-free, Polaroid-type reality .. .. Banal coffee talk, no complaints ' - a surreal touch ..

[Stephen]

That's a pretty amazing poem!

[Daisy Morgy]

aww i loved this so much! it was so sweet and different the way you described rain and pain in the style tha you did :) Loved it!

[Neon]

The mixture of Rain with Pain and Pain in Rain's wonderfully captured. Lovely poem, it's an interesting one to read, nice work.

[Sami Khalil]

"jazzy-joy sounds struggling my pain

Pain"

Painfully beautiful ... Tearfully splendid...:)..............

[Baban.A.A]

the descriptions and expressions were great. I liked the way you have chosen the words which were fresh and suitable for the plot of the poem. the story inside the poem was like a common feeling for some people, humans sometimes get to a stage of emptiness and anguish in life, but the poen still ends in pain but I hope it doesn't to other humans. great well done.

[Riya Rashmi]

This is quite simply astonishing! Your poem is a joy to read out loud even if the content isn't joyful. The way the words roll off my mouth makes me want to read your poem again and again and keep it close to me :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the way this is presented, rain, pain, rain, pain....a poem within a poem, the splash of the rain but the feel of the pain within...

nicely done.

jacob

[zainul]

Feel the love of cappuccino.
Wonderful work.