peacefull night

I was standing on my window yesterday night

Clear mind,clean head

for that one silent moment 

instead of being surrounded by shallow minds

who just keep searching for their perfect lie

one dark night cigarette in hand

silent view of the one

who shed

the tears at night but now instead only clean mind and clean head

Author's Note

honestly it just popped out of my mind so be gentle

Reviews

[BlackRose]

Not a bad piece you penned err typed here. Very good. Can't function without the mind being clear to relax and to think clearly and rationally.

@{/:o)

[Justine]

I think it's true that people do search "for the perfect lie". I like the way you formatted this poem, with effective use of repetition of phrases to keep the focus. Nice writing and I enjoyed the read :) Justine

[CoraZanini]

thank you justine,i appreciate it!

[Sami Khalil]

We need those peaceful moments...Thank you for sharing...:)....................

[CoraZanini]

we do indeed!

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).................

[Matt Sayer]

Solace in silence, bliss in being completely alone. Our heads are our refuge from a kicking, screaming world, and sometimes we need to retreat in order to resupply our sanity and rebuild our defenses before facing the onslaught of reality. I really enjoyed the line "shallow minds who just keep searching for their perfect lie". So many people search for one unequivocal answer to their lives, when they should instead be looking inside themselves for meaning. Great poem! :)

[CoraZanini]

thank you,i appreciate!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Indeed it's a peaceful moment to be alone sometimes. The thought is clearly stated here. Nice job!