One shade of pain

One shade of pain

A Story by Nourhan
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It is short quote from one of my stories about pain , hope and faith

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- So , tell me something , can you say that color is called light black ? , She said in a deep voice. 

- No , it's just black , there's no color called that , black is one shade ,he said quietly .

-Yeah , that's exactly the pain and sadness,  you can't say that is light pain or that is heavy  pain , it's one pain and it always hurts , it's killing me every day but i am helpless,  my death is the only solution , She explained .
 
- no don't you say that again , you will be healed , i am sure about it , you know what ! i think we can make the light black we can create it together by adding the hope,  faith and trust to our pain , you're going to be all right.  He replied in tears.

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I suppose one could argue that no shades of comfort can ease black pain... As black is just... Black... Hmm... Thoughtfully penned...

Posted 3 Months Ago


i love this. i do have a few suggestions though, if i'm jumping boundaries, my great apologies. i think it's kind of rushed- i think it would be great if you added more detail, added more conversation & more comfort between the two characters.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Actually l loved your suggestions appreciate it , i will put them in mind in my next story, but th.. read more
xoxo

4 Months Ago

aw i'm glad!
Nourhan

4 Months Ago

❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
To feel someone's pain is not plain sailing...pain is always a balance of both light and dark, sometimes all we can do is catch the person when they fall, this is unique, I enjoyed reading...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your precious words , my pleasure 😀😊😊
The thing with telling anyone that they'll be alright, that their pain will ease is kind of like just empty words. I liked how you compared pain with black colour.
A nice, thought provoking piece.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Nourhan

5 Months Ago

Thanks yumna for you kind words 😊😊
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

You're welcome, N. Always a pleasure reading good works :)
Very thoughtful and thought provoking. We all lose hope, faith, and trust. That loss is called pain, but if we mix those things back into the darkness; we find a way to lighten it up. Even though it may feel like death, we must start anew with the good in life. Very strong message.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Nourhan

5 Months Ago

Thanks chris , your words made my day 😊
Chris

5 Months Ago

I'm glad I made your day then :)
This is so beautiful!
And I really like the title.
Good one, keep going.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Nourhan

5 Months Ago

Thank you , appreciate it ❤

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