I am a star

I am a star

A Story by Nourhan
"

Can you understand her ?

"
"Who are you ? " He asked confusedly 
She laughed sorely and whispered,  "I am a star"
He looked at her deprecatingly and said " really!  , but i have never watched you on TV before,  i think you have a serious mental illness"  
She smiled a half smile while she was flipping her dark short hair 
" you are such an idiot,  exactly like all of the people here , i am a star literally,  star like those stars above us , i think you will never understand me " she said and pop out , but his voice stopped her 
" wait , just tell me more " he shouted 
She looked at him and then looked at the sky with shining green eyes " I am a star , exactly like the stars above  , they are shining beautifully from a distance but if you get closer you will find flaming stuffs " she explained. 
The sky began to rain so she stopped speaking and closed her eyes , But he became more confused so he said " what do you mean ? , i can't understand anything " 
She smiled and said " see ! , I told you...." 
Then she pop out between the heavy rain and disappeared like ghost. 

© 2017 Nourhan



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I like how you made a conversation inside it, I enjoyed reading this good job!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Happy to hear that, thanks 😊
I like the descriptiveness i might be bias cause I have green eyes haha but I like it keep writing and work on the little things like grammar

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Well, let's replace yours with mine 😂😇
bella

4 Months Ago

deal haha we'll figure it out
Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Lol 😂😂😂👍👍👍
The story was very interesting, and it has that element of attachment to the unknown. The boy wants to know who/what the star is, and he questions her until she disappears to the rain. Great job.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Thanks chris, happy to hear that 😊
Chris

4 Months Ago

I'm glad you're happy then. :)
I like the ending how the star disappeared because of the rain. It seemed like a plot twist to me. (Just improve on the grammar, spelling, and proper capitalization)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your review, i am trying to improve but my progress is slow because I am busy with my.. read more
Psychotic Lily

4 Months Ago

I like your spirit. Don't ever give up!
Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your kindness, appreciate it ❤ ❤
This was a really good short story, I loved the little witty comments the star would say to the boy. Keep on writing!!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your visit and review 😊
aha...nice write...keep going.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Thank you wajiha 😊
I loved it..amazing piece dear..keep writing!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Happy for that 😊, thanks ❤❤
Sofia

4 Months Ago

You're welcome 😊
Curious and a brilliant answer, and that answer can be related to many.....
I liked it...:)

Posted 4 Months Ago


i absolutely love this piece. it's very mysterious and it's beautiful as i can feel the emotion in both characters very well. good job!!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Yeah happy for that 😊 i feel like i made this better than before, thanks for your reviews , and.. read more
a perfect example of single train of thought ... tunnel vision
how often is one approached thru stereotyping
sad that many need be hand fed endlessly the existence of the big picture ...
'I can't understand anything'

Posted 4 Months Ago


Nourhan

4 Months Ago

Actually I couldn't get your own point of view, make it clearer please 😊
ABG 2.0

4 Months Ago

one says you are not a star because you have not been on tv ...
limited opinion limited obser.. read more
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