Where are you dear?

Where are you dear?

A Poem by Nora

I was so lonely,
Surrounded by two hundred people,
but still lonely in my mind,
Then you came,
You fill my world,
And I knew what  was missing from me,
I became happy again,
I became me again, 
Then you run away,
Disappeared like if you were a ghost,
 I gushed searching for you,
At every place, at every corner, I knew,
But I didn't find you,
You have gone and will never come back to me,
Like if you were a salt and melt into the sea,
I screamed while the rain was falling, at the middle of a street I've never been in,
" where are you, dear?" " why did you come into my life if you should leave me that way"
Now I am lonely again,
alone, broken and missing you.

© 2017 Nora


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Some people sadly cross paths for weeks or days never years
A lovely write ✍️

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Alone we came & alone we need to go. We search for companions to & fro & in return gets sorrows get broke....

Posted 3 Years Ago


It really is terrible to enjoy somebodies presence and then all of a sudden there just not around anymore, especially if that person brought so much life out of you. Relatable. I especially loved the line "Like if you were a salt and melt into the sea" that was genius. Lovely poem! I hope you find someone else you can be yourself around. 😊


Posted 6 Years Ago


A very sad poem dear friend.
"At every place, at every corner, I knew,
But I didn't find you"
When the love disappeared. Old heart must suffer. Thank you Nora for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote


Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :), and thank you so much for your review
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Always my pleasure dear friend. Have a safe and fun New year.
A sad tale so bravely expressed; unmasked vulnerability in the purest sense. And, yet, I see strength, and the will to stand alone. Nice work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Thanks Robert :)), appreciate it
Sad and beautiful
A person can change everything
Or destroy everything

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review, appreciate it

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