It was always you

It was always you

A Poem by Norah

Feelings not shared nor expressed,

                Lay down deep in my heart wrecked,

I know no way to help myself mend,

              The love that never knew an end.


© 2017 Norah

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That's an absolutely terrific poem you've written there Norah; it's very emotionally charged, especially for such a concise piece!

Posted 1 Month Ago

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I like it too, but it goes better with fish tacos and lime juice. Freak-in real! 100/100

Posted 2 Months Ago

Powerful emotions about a love that was not to be. Take heart, you will find a way to go on the mend. Give it time.

Posted 2 Months Ago

Deep words.. really touching, and well written, bravo

Posted 3 Months Ago

sometimes love can haunt you !

Posted 3 Months Ago

Very beautiful! Lovely last line!

Posted 3 Months Ago

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Unrequited love....mostly for fear of rejection if expressed, or....designs on another's partner.
I really liked this Norah

Posted 4 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounded like midnight or 2 A M thoughts at a kitchen table. Seems we have those as time goes by.

Posted 4 Months Ago

This is truly heartfelt and honest. Short yet powerful in every way. Good read.

Posted 5 Months Ago

I think a lot of people can relate to this. This was beautiful.


Posted 5 Months Ago

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Added on June 26, 2017
Last Updated on July 4, 2017
Tags: feelings, broken, pain, sad, sorrow, sick



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