Senile Romance

Senile Romance

A Poem by Norman223

I love your gleaming smile
And winsome pout.
Oh, no.... It's  your false teeth
Falling out.


© 2017 Norman223



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Love this! Gave me the laugh I needed.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Gee expressed my sentiments, exactly...
thank you for the smile...and i will be careful not to laugh to hard and let my teeth fall out.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Norman223

10 Months Ago

Thanks Jacob for your phu-phu-phu -funny response.
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Gee
Norman, BEHAVE....Thank you for the Saturday morning chuckle

Posted 10 Months Ago


Norman223

10 Months Ago

All part of the service Gee. No charge!!
N.
Gee

10 Months Ago

Thank God for that, I'm skint post Christmas. Have a good day Norman
Hahaha!

Short and sharp and very funny!

As witty as ever, Norman. Another fine write.

Posted 10 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Norman223

10 Months Ago

Thanks Doodley. She hasn't seen this yet, so for now, no worries


Absolutely brilliant, a great little chuckle 😆

Posted 10 Months Ago


This made me laugh so loud! HA!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Norman223

10 Months Ago

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. :-D
Just what I needed on a cold blustery day, a good laugh. Valentine

Posted 10 Months Ago


Norman223

10 Months Ago



Thanks Kathie, As we are now getting sub zero temperatures and strong winds. I sha.. read more
I really couldn't stop laughing, sir .
Amazing poem with a brilliant punch !!
This surely changes the mood of a reader.

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Norman223

10 Months Ago

Thank you Gorthi. As I'm not a real poet, I enjoy light hearted verse, as it gives me something to .. read more
This is absolute pleasure reading this. I burst into laughter... Thank you for sharing this, sir!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Norman223

10 Months Ago

Glad to have raised a smile. Thank you Bala.
A guffaw dear Sir ...your extracted a huge guffaw.
and a titter...

This is class Norman.
xD

Posted 10 Months Ago


Norman223

10 Months Ago

Thanks Tony- sometimes I have to face reality
:-《
Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

I had a sneeze once in a niteclub and the front crown flew across the dance floor - being plasticky .. read more

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