Senile Romance

Senile Romance

A Poem by Norman223

Your gleaming smile
And winsome pout.
Oh, no. It's  your false teeth
Falling out.


© 2017 Norman223



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Gee expressed my sentiments, exactly...
thank you for the smile...and i will be careful not to laugh to hard and let my teeth fall out.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Norman223

1 Month Ago

Thanks Jacob for your phu-phu-phu -funny response.
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Gee
Norman, BEHAVE....Thank you for the Saturday morning chuckle

Posted 1 Month Ago


Norman223

1 Month Ago

All part of the service Gee. No charge!!
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Gee

1 Month Ago

Thank God for that, I'm skint post Christmas. Have a good day Norman
Hahaha!

Short and sharp and very funny!

As witty as ever, Norman. Another fine write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Norman223

1 Month Ago

Thanks Doodley. She hasn't seen this yet, so for now, no worries


Absolutely brilliant, a great little chuckle 😆

Posted 1 Month Ago


This made me laugh so loud! HA!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Norman223

1 Month Ago

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. :-D
Just what I needed on a cold blustery day, a good laugh. Valentine

Posted 1 Month Ago


Norman223

1 Month Ago



Thanks Kathie, As we are now getting sub zero temperatures and strong winds. I sha.. read more
I really couldn't stop laughing, sir .
Amazing poem with a brilliant punch !!
This surely changes the mood of a reader.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Norman223

1 Month Ago

Thank you Gorthi. As I'm not a real poet, I enjoy light hearted verse, as it gives me something to .. read more
This is absolute pleasure reading this. I burst into laughter... Thank you for sharing this, sir!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Norman223

1 Month Ago

Glad to have raised a smile. Thank you Bala.
A guffaw dear Sir ...your extracted a huge guffaw.
and a titter...

This is class Norman.
xD

Posted 1 Month Ago


Norman223

1 Month Ago

Thanks Tony- sometimes I have to face reality
:-《
Tony Jordan

1 Month Ago

I had a sneeze once in a niteclub and the front crown flew across the dance floor - being plasticky .. read more
Ha-ha, thanks for the laugh! After reading the news this morning, it's just what I needed.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Norman223

1 Month Ago

Beaming grin, Sam. My pleasure.

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Added on January 10, 2017
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Norman223
Norman223

Essex, United Kingdom



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At the age of 86, I now write as an optimistic exercise in keeping senility at bay . Humour and satire, are my preferred writing style,as I can have a legitimate moan about things without depressing.. more..

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