Senile Romance

Senile Romance

A Poem by Norman223

Your gleaming smile
And winsome pout.
Oh, no. It's  your false teeth
Falling out.


© 2017 Norman223



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Love this! Gave me the laugh I needed.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Gee expressed my sentiments, exactly...
thank you for the smile...and i will be careful not to laugh to hard and let my teeth fall out.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Norman223

3 Months Ago

Thanks Jacob for your phu-phu-phu -funny response.
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Gee
Norman, BEHAVE....Thank you for the Saturday morning chuckle

Posted 3 Months Ago


Norman223

3 Months Ago

All part of the service Gee. No charge!!
N.
Gee

3 Months Ago

Thank God for that, I'm skint post Christmas. Have a good day Norman
Hahaha!

Short and sharp and very funny!

As witty as ever, Norman. Another fine write.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Norman223

3 Months Ago

Thanks Doodley. She hasn't seen this yet, so for now, no worries


Absolutely brilliant, a great little chuckle 😆

Posted 3 Months Ago


This made me laugh so loud! HA!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Norman223

3 Months Ago

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. :-D
Just what I needed on a cold blustery day, a good laugh. Valentine

Posted 3 Months Ago


Norman223

3 Months Ago



Thanks Kathie, As we are now getting sub zero temperatures and strong winds. I sha.. read more
I really couldn't stop laughing, sir .
Amazing poem with a brilliant punch !!
This surely changes the mood of a reader.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Norman223

3 Months Ago

Thank you Gorthi. As I'm not a real poet, I enjoy light hearted verse, as it gives me something to .. read more
This is absolute pleasure reading this. I burst into laughter... Thank you for sharing this, sir!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Norman223

3 Months Ago

Glad to have raised a smile. Thank you Bala.
A guffaw dear Sir ...your extracted a huge guffaw.
and a titter...

This is class Norman.
xD

Posted 3 Months Ago


Norman223

3 Months Ago

Thanks Tony- sometimes I have to face reality
:-《
Tony Jordan

3 Months Ago

I had a sneeze once in a niteclub and the front crown flew across the dance floor - being plasticky .. read more

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Norman223
Norman223

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At the age of 86, I enjoy the challenge of writing, as an optimistic attempt to delay senility. However, I admit to being a victim of the "generation gap",which means that I am not always in tune wit.. more..

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