Aspiration

Aspiration

A Poem by Norman223

 

A circle must be the greatest thing

A straight line aspires to be.

For when it’s bent into a ring

Its length becomes infinity


© 2017 Norman223



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This is short poetry in a nut shell; it expresses a deeper truth with less words.

A VERY BEAUTIFUL WAY TO CAPTURE SUCH A TRUTH AND IDEA.

WELL DONE

Posted 7 Months Ago


A hamster wheel comes to mind; but that's aspiration for you. :))

Beccy.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Norman223

9 Months Ago

That sounds like a stairway to infinity. More ambulation than aspiration by the sound of it. A .. read more
Yes, indeed! If I didn't twirl spaghetti around my fork, it'd take all day to eat!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Norman223

10 Months Ago

Well, I suppose it could be a way to pasta time away, Sam!!
love should be enduring like this...it should be that close and closed circle...
if only.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Norman223

10 Months Ago

Vey true,Jacob, even if it does occasionally go pear shaped.
Infinity, yes! In wedded bliss.... or wedded hell. It depends!

Though the way marriage is regarded these days I don't see too many reaching infinity.

A clever write, Norman. Lovely flow and rhyme.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Norman223

10 Months Ago

Thanks Doodley. Having managed to reach our 54th anniversary, I still have high hopes. I didn't .. read more

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Norman223
Norman223

Essex UK, United Kingdom



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