Aspiration

Aspiration

A Poem by Norman223

 

A circle must be the greatest thing

A straight line aspires to be.

For when it’s bent into a ring

Its length becomes infinity


© 2017 Norman223



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This is short poetry in a nut shell; it expresses a deeper truth with less words.

A VERY BEAUTIFUL WAY TO CAPTURE SUCH A TRUTH AND IDEA.

WELL DONE

Posted 10 Months Ago


A hamster wheel comes to mind; but that's aspiration for you. :))

Beccy.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Norman223

1 Year Ago

That sounds like a stairway to infinity. More ambulation than aspiration by the sound of it. A .. read more
Yes, indeed! If I didn't twirl spaghetti around my fork, it'd take all day to eat!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Norman223

1 Year Ago

Well, I suppose it could be a way to pasta time away, Sam!!
love should be enduring like this...it should be that close and closed circle...
if only.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Norman223

1 Year Ago

Vey true,Jacob, even if it does occasionally go pear shaped.
Infinity, yes! In wedded bliss.... or wedded hell. It depends!

Though the way marriage is regarded these days I don't see too many reaching infinity.

A clever write, Norman. Lovely flow and rhyme.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Norman223

1 Year Ago

Thanks Doodley. Having managed to reach our 54th anniversary, I still have high hopes. I didn't .. read more

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Norman223
Norman223

Essex UK, United Kingdom



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