A Poem by Norman223

An experimental doodle.... Try it!







With the Mobius strip, I decided

To experiment, so I applied it.

By twisting it twice

 Before making the splice.

 Then cut it lengthwise

And surprise ,surprise.

You get a ring with another inside it.

 But if you can't resist

Only making ONE twist 

How do you surmise

 You get only ONE  ring.

... But it's double  the size. 

© 2017 Norman223

Author's Note

More information about Mobius on Google.

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You are a bit twisted this time Norman but very amusing. I've had fun making these in the past. In a moment of madness I wondered whether you could actually write a poem consisting of two syllable words onto the strip itself and then by cutting it you would get two poems. Yes - I am bonkers. Glad to see you are being creative.

Posted 10 Months Ago


10 Months Ago

Brilliant idea, Alan. I tried it, but all I could get was a split infinitive. Who's the looney, n.. read more
like Lord of the Rings---one ring that makes others---
one love that expands into others---two rings intertwining...doesn't seem as big as one ring by itself, but is more powerful.

Posted 10 Months Ago

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10 Months Ago

Thank you Jacob. I see that you have created yet another twist to my words in your own inimitable.. read more
Nice new clean style of page layout! Love it! Now, about the concept . . . this is where you do a great blend of your natural artistry, as well as your talent for words. I looked it up, but still can't visualize how this thing works. I'm going to have to go to you-tube later & find a film so I can see it. But the web is kinda slow right now on this, the biggest cyber shopping day of the year, supposedly! It's definitely slow, but I guess it's all those billions of dollars being separated from their credit cards! *smile* Love it when your mind is humming with wit. My favorite thing is when a writer has new, interesting, unusual things to write about every time. In this, you rock! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 10 Months Ago

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Added on November 27, 2017
Last Updated on November 27, 2017



Essex UK, United Kingdom

At the age of 87, I still believe that every cloud has a silver lining. My biggest problem is .. I can only afford cooking foil...............;-)) more..

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