Talking That Talk While Working On A Walk

Talking That Talk While Working On A Walk

A Poem by Chaos Complex
"

Get yourself some swagger and style!

"
I'm having flashbacks.
Filthy mouths filled with thumbtacks.
Spit sharp words,
While hurting themselves;
Getting their just desserts!
I feel nostalgic,
When they get apologetic.
I was never a lunatic,
I always had a method to my madness!

I may not be the smartest-
I may not be fit for photos.
I may not be celebrity status. (Anytime soon...)
But I've got the style to "WOW" the crowds.
I've got the heart to leave em' with open mouths.
I'm on the verge of ripping out of this cocoon,
With a swagger that will make them all swoon.

I gave up on prayin',
And with a smirk, I'm sayin'-
Religion is nice,
but "Sorry, your God ain't for me."
They glare and stare with intensity.
Wishing their creator would erase- instead of pencil me.
But I've got my own design,
I'm constructing my own heaven, so don't waste your time!
 
I ain't portrayin' myself as a wise one.
I ain't sure I'm going to win in the long run.
But while I've got a soul,
I'm going to stay in my own control.
I've got the sarcasm to counter life's irony.
And please, don't keep eyein' me.
You might get blinded by the star you see...
[Eventually!]

© 2010 Chaos Complex



Author's Note

Chaos Complex
I wasn't trying to offend any religious people out there. I just wrote this to show a bit of my fun loving personality and how I value my individuality. It was all written with fun and a cool tune in mind. :P Feedback would be appreciated!

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i like the arrogance part. it outsmears, ---mishel :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


Excelent like everything else so far!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this, and I love your individuality. haha
"I'm on the verge of ripping out of this cocoon,
With a swagger that will make them all swoon."

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i took no ofence awsom poem i flowe ok and totaly about inderviduality (ok that may not be spelt rite)
great work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i felt that your thoughts were expressed nicely.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I must say you have given a very catchy title to this poem... It is well written poem showing you and your attitude towards life. It was fun reading it! Thanks for sharing it ...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 22, 2010
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Tags: swagger, style, individuality, fun

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Chaos Complex
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I like to express my emotions and feelings in poetry. I write a lot of rap/hip hop stuff. I'm really vulgar. Deal with it. I don't get many reviews, but thank you to those who even bother to re.. more..

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