Halloween

Halloween

A Poem by Nothing Personal

Its not your regular Saturday,
As you wait all alone in the dark,
Distant rumbling of thunder far away
Shrieks of laughter & spattered happiness.

Masks, Colors , Blood keep you merry
Blazing music and burning tonics create frenzy,
Expect anything on a night like this
As the world sways to and fro.

Oh its relentlessly unrelenting,
Cant you live your regular Saturday?
The hunger tonight is demonic
You have to eat all while you can.

Few crashes here and there,
Few screams drown away
Few laughter turns to tears,
As the night lives on.

Desires are meant for impulses,
Burning hands seek ice,
Incensed smells & luscious lips
Are all for you tonight.

She looks at you with bright blue eyes
A streak of auburn in her hair,
Black is appalling goes through your mind
As distances disappear.

Passion birds & vermilion fireflies,
White mixed with brown desire,
Of green grasses & blue skies far away,
So much longing yet so much fear.



© Nothing Personal. October 30, 2010.






© 2010 Nothing Personal


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slightly more formulaic than normal NP! which I obviously love ;) and a rather consistent rhyme scheme sneaking through though you try to fight it off haha as always such a great play on words (relentlessly unrelenting = great!!) and a strong meaning woven in to the tapestry as well!!

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Interesting take on the spooky night of the year!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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slightly more formulaic than normal NP! which I obviously love ;) and a rather consistent rhyme scheme sneaking through though you try to fight it off haha as always such a great play on words (relentlessly unrelenting = great!!) and a strong meaning woven in to the tapestry as well!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Totally agree with Mrs. Invisible!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome and scary poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your lines, "Desires are meant for impulses,Burning hands seek ice,Incensed smells & luscious lipsAre all for you tonight." is an absolute scorcher!

Yikes! It's scary, yet seductive...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Well written poem. I enjoyed reading it. Yep there is a little naughtiness in the poem, which I love a lot.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good! I felt the spooky, mischievousness in the air!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i liked that....very cool..better then mine

Posted 13 Years Ago


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