lonely crane

haiku

A lonely crane stands
in a pool of murky water
White butterflies watch

© Nothing Personal. February 9, 2011.

Reviews

[. serah .]

. ah, yes ... but of course ... the whiteness in this piece of poetry against blue skies and blue water ... is like a beautiful water colour painting ... and on being watched ... not enough can ever be said ...

[Robin]

love haiku , love this one

[.]

I can't do these..you have done it beautifully..

[paul]

ohh. beautiful

[trainwreck]

Not bad for a haiku. its not my favorite format, so I'm a tad bit biased against it. Still, its a good write, like everything else from you I've seen.