FOG

FOG

A Poem by November Gold
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"little by little the fog clears and we see so much; so clearly.

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FOG

I had to come talk to you right away

I was thinking about you while I was driving,

And I have some things to say.

I love you so much and I feel like I haven’t been

Very good to you lately;

It was never my intention to leave you feeling so alone.

I saw something in your eyes; a warrior’s soul;

And I know that you’re tired of the struggles day after day

But you have to keep pushing forward

Because you are going to be alright,

You are going to rise above this, I promise.

If you could see you through my eyes

You would see your worth and you would

Know the value that you have.

I feel you growing though, the

Transformation is amazing to behold!

I know you’re tired but you’ve come so far;

And you have to know that you will overcome

All of this; that someday you’ll look back and smile

At the memories and the lessons, even the ones that kicked your

A*s for a minute, and had you doubting your own strength.

Today is a new day, just listen to me, I’ve got you,

I truly do, and I vow to take better care of you from this moment on.

Work with me, I can’t do it alone, just trust in me.

Take my hand… breathe deep…find your balance;

You need me; I need you. Balance.

I’ll keep the fog wiped off the mirror

So that I can see you better from now on.

 



© 2011 November Gold



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The first half had me for some reason picturing someone visiting a loved ones grave, the conversational tone of absence as you say sorry. Then the ending bringing into focus the real resiprecant of the message yourself. This is awesome an instant favourite and being shelved. Keep em' coming

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What a truly devotion for another. I love the serenity in this piece, and wise words. This person and you should be so blessed with each other. Your ending words say so much, and give so much trust. Very nice!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderful pep talk. Such great expression of unconditional support and faith... if you wrote that for someone I hope they got to read it.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'If you could see you through my eyes
You would see your worth and you would
Know the value that you have."

That is so powerful..and exactly how I feel about a close friend... Excellent write...xo

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ooooh very deep in desire... and an inspiration for another... that was a great read indeed!! I LOVED IT!! to find strength in eachother... when its found and locked, there is no stopping or room for breakdown. such a beautiful message!!
thank you for sharing!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very insightful and encouraging write. I felt the need want and desires. Another remarkable inking by a truly remarkable and awesome spirited lady. Lov ya kiddo.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The first half had me for some reason picturing someone visiting a loved ones grave, the conversational tone of absence as you say sorry. Then the ending bringing into focus the real resiprecant of the message yourself. This is awesome an instant favourite and being shelved. Keep em' coming

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the conversational tone of this piece, the warm loving encouragement, like you were speaking directly to me,,...so wonderful...Good morning....Ms.Gold

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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November Gold
November Gold

Green Bay, WI



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