A good life

A poem about following your dreams and achieving success no matter how difficult.

Always strive for success
Never aim for anything less
Yes there is one major thing called stress,
And it is most probably all due to the press.
Getting the life you desire is a fight,
But at the end it is all so tight,
Battle with and summon all your might
So you may lie down and say what a good night.
Be powerful, creative, constructive and very strong
And you will easily prove anybody wrong,
If you do that people will best know you as King-Kong.
Learn to use carefully and wisely what’s on the clock
And for sure you will definitely rock
Aim to be on the top
And you will never be a flop

Author's Note

Please be brutally honest and correct me with grammar punctuation etc. compliments will be greatly appreciated (:

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

This is so much full of good meanings. Small details flounder so elegantly. Like "
So you may lie down and say what a good night"
A good night's sleep comes only after working hard. It gets better when you achieve the thing for which you worked so hard, and you will, because you were honest!
Very nice poem! :-)