She is.....

She is.....

A Poem by Nwang

She is.......
The blood in my veins

She is........
The truth behind my lies

She is........
The first drops of rain

She is.......
The hidden garden in my heart

She is.......
The dew on the mountain top

She is.......
The first drop of wine

She is.........
The orchid of the wild

She is........
The lost child of time

She is........
The cool breeze on a hot summer

She is.......
The first light of dawn

She is.......
The rhythm to my song

She is........
The verse to my poetry.


© 2016 Nwang



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This is wonderful. It is very clever. I really think this show how much you care about whom ever she is. You are saying she is your better half. This flows so greatly. You did a very nice job. Yours truely a mad lord

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review!
Your 'She is' is very beautifully presented. That's how it feels.
Good poetry and very cleverly written.
Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.:-):-):-)


Posted 1 Year Ago


Interesting, the title itself creates the curiosity... N lovely expressed about "she"...awesome poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thank you :D
She is.... just amazing..
Nwang, I don't know if this is a fiction or a non fiction. All that I can say for this verse is about the excellent feelings put... The type of sentences you have framed, being similar, provoke so many different ideas and supports but each line has the same feeling called love. She is really very lucky to have such a great poet... My dear, it's a great job again. The striking emotion put here sound amazing. Each piece that we dedicate to someone are always comparatively good... I liked the words u hv put like dew in mountains, first rain, first light of sun, rhythm to song and verse to poem....wow... simplicity flowing all around... very sweet my dear...
Anindita : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

by the way, is she a reality ??
Nwang

1 Year Ago

She kind of is, actually this poem is my dedication to all the women who have hadcan impact on my li.. read more
Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

ohh.. then it's really very nice...
Wow! love your poem .nice piece of writing.Keep on writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thank you @Arooj
Arooj Purra

1 Year Ago

My pleasure.
wow...really nice...and keep going on writing like this

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thank you @Riya
Very beautifully constructed. Loved it :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ms.Awesome ;)
Lauren_The_Awesome

1 Year Ago

Your welcome :)
Awwwe. Such a sweet poem :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thank you. Much appreciated.

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Nwang
Nwang

kolkata, west bengal, India



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