This Night

This Night

A Poem by Nwang

These are the stars
Under which we promised eternity,
A similar night shaded dark and blue
As you held me and I held you.

My heart would melt 
At the sound of your voice
And my hand would tremble 
At the soft touch of your skin.

As I looked into your eyes
Deeper than the sea
I would drown,I would drown 
Ever so happily.

The fireflies illuminate the darkness
Like your body at night,
The night wind howls
As if whispering your name.

Now you are gone
Like the stars at dawn
In the arms of another,
In the arms of another.

Your curls now hide another face
The fingers that touch you are not mine
And your lips which had once touched mine
Now kiss another.

The night is dark
And at the stars I am staring
Knowing and feeling your memories
Of a night like this.

 Like the night has forgotten day
I will forget you
Along with all your memories
I will bury my suffering too

As I write the beginning and the end
This maybe our finale.
And next time on a night like this
You will only be a verse in this poetry.


© 2016 Nwang



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Wow, this is a nice pain filled poem. And how the heart that promised eternity had broken into pieces to the end to say

"I will forget you
Along with all your memories
I will bury my suffering too"

can only portray the amount of betrayal. Nice poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review ^_^



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Very deep .... liked the way you have expressed the pain of loosing her to someone else..... thanks for sharing this beautiful creation :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review @Ria
Your poem echoed the ache all through....
The line says it all " you will only be a verse in this poetry".
I loved reading this poem, especially the whole last stanza.
A very good write.
Thanks for sharing. Keep sharing.:-):-):-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your lovely review..
really enjoyed this piece of writing loved the last verse

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the review !!!
Wrenches the heart...such bonds always leave a mark and how quickly the world shifts in appearance when the situation changes, sigh...lovely piece :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the review :D
Nwang well done...ur poem is really good

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the review!!!
Lovely and tragic..nicely written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the review!
Break ups are so over rated

What is in the heart is in the heart ...... you watch people so stubbornly force their head onto another's shoulder or kiss someone new

but that love
the real one

well no new person can change that

no moving on changes that

a very sad write

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nwang

1 Year Ago

love is short,forgetting is long and how can you unlove something which you loved once. Thanks for r.. read more
Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Love is long .... It's endless .... ThAt stuff is a lifetime story .... Humans that can't absorb it .. read more
I like your poem very much. Many people write of light & dark, night & day, so sometimes it can start to all sound the same to me. But in your case, your expressions sound original & I think it's becuz of some creative & interesting details such as: "your curls now hide another face." I always prefer when a sad poem ends with a sign of hope or resurgence of confidence . . . such as in your final stanza.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the review!!
It is such a beautiful, painful romantic poem! Loved it! : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

1 Year Ago

thanks for the review
Wow, this is a nice pain filled poem. And how the heart that promised eternity had broken into pieces to the end to say

"I will forget you
Along with all your memories
I will bury my suffering too"

can only portray the amount of betrayal. Nice poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review ^_^

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