Mine To Control

I dream of being a conqueror.

Every little thing is mine to control

Don’t think you can hide cause you’re on my roll

The birds in the sky

The fish in the sea

All act like my eyes

All things for me

To hide things from me is bold

What a shame when I get a hold

 

Cause it is not yours anymore

Reviews

[_Hanabi_]

This is a short but lovely poem.
Gets right to the point. I like that.
I see that it speaks about taking control of things.
i wonder if there is an underlying meaning though.

There is also a spelling error at line 4 "See" I'm not sure if that's what you meant because the line after talks about acting like eyes. so i'm not sure if its suppose to be Sea :)

[OPMAD]

Yes you are correct. Line 4 was a typo and I appreciate that you pointed it out.

There isn't an underlying meaning just what I think it would like to be a conqueror or something to that degree.