WAY BACK HOME

WAY BACK HOME

A Poem by Ov3R_sKiLl3D
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IT WAS A POEM OF CHILD WHO WAS committing suicide......

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The road back home is the,
Only way more and more,
With each day it's more,
Evident this world is not for me.
I tried suicide when I was 10,
People who really know me think,
I'm just a disease, a cancer that erases away,
I never get to see your precious face,
Or whisper a word in your ears to feel you're safe.

I will never get to fall asleep in your arms,
I will never get to hear you laugh and giggle.
Before committing suicide I realized one thing...
If you don't remember who you really are,
You can't find your way back home...
I turn away my face and,
Find my way back home...

© 2015 Ov3R_sKiLl3D



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Ov3R_sKiLl3D
Hope you are gonna like this....

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This composition creates an image of reality in my head. Good job! it's a good read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


wow this was deep and I know how u feel

Posted 2 Years Ago


In our area are many little children living with foster parents. Some attend my church, many have confused thoughts as to where their real home is. A sad and deep write. Kathie

Posted 2 Years Ago


I like this, especially the 'if you don't remember who you really are you can't find your way back home...'
nicely done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


dark IS a reality - too easy to get lost in... at any age. Strong thoughts need being spoken.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

I am glad u liked it :)
nice topic and very well written,,,,,but suicide at 10!!! anyway good one.....

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :)
another topic to focus on. good work, Salman. suicide is a complicated reality we're facing. the way you express it portrays the sad reality of the tragedy that can happen even in young age. keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :)
Sad and dark poem ! ... no matter what there's enough love within ourselves to shine a light on our life to find our way back home ... darkness recede with believe :-)


Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

Thank for your review :)
Wow, I'm speechless.. This was so wonderful..

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)
Cool Girl

2 Years Ago

welcome!!:)
it's a strong sentence.... you can't find your way back home........ first realize who you are then try to learn where is your home turn back and find it........ amazing wonderful piece pf poetry......

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

i am glad u liked it :)

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Worthington, OH



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i am a 17 years old boy..... M a really friendly person. Like to write,read and talk to new people.m a loving,caring and funny type of guy.This is all i can tell hope u guys are gonna like my way of .. more..

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