Life

Life

A Poem by Ov3R_sKiLl3D
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A small poem but i think soo true .......

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Life changes in every second

We never know what will happen

We smile

We cry

We win

We lose

It turn around so quickly

That why life is a subtle puzzle…

Life…..life lives, life dies.

Life laughs, life cries.

Life gives up, life tries.

Life is not measured by the breaths we take,

But by the moments that take our….

   BREATH AWAY


© 2015 Ov3R_sKiLl3D



Author's Note

Ov3R_sKiLl3D
Hope u r gonna like this.... :)

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amazingly written keep it up and well penned!

Posted 1 Year Ago


very quaint truth
set to poetry


-Dream

Posted 2 Years Ago


Every second of life is ever year of life- Lizardo xD
I love this poem, your vision of what is life is simply thought provoking and beautiful.
Great poem, another fine piece of work from you :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)
You have captured the essence of life in this one.
"Life is not measured by the breaths we take,
But by the moments that take our….
BREATH AWAY" - couldn't agree more. A really good write.:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks m glad u liked it.....
Very nice last line! Not the breaths we take but what takes our breath away. Well said. I need to remember this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review #Nila :)
So true! Life's like a journey of which you are the driver.Some routes might not be familiar, but that's the beauty of the journey!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)
I love this piece. It's short and simple but yet some what complex. very meaningful. Keep up the good work Ov3R_sKiLl3D. -DRAGON

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)thanks for the review :)
Lovely wording!!
Well done!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)
so true !! well said lil-brother ;) nice piece

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)
Now this one I really enjoyed. The ending three lines are superb. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)

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Ov3R_sKiLl3D

Worthington, OH



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i am a 17 years old boy..... M a really friendly person. Like to write,read and talk to new people.m a loving,caring and funny type of guy.This is all i can tell hope u guys are gonna like my way of .. more..

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