Being a Man

I forget when I came up with this, just one of the things I spew from my mouth at any given time.

Part of being a man is to be the pillar for a foundation that is people

Author's Note

Ahh I remember, this was what I came up with because I realized that men in general, "good guys" as you can call them, take on such a role. That is the role of a man, stand your ground, protect, preserve, and some even build. =)

Reviews

[S]

Hi, I like this, if you don't mind my suggesting I think it would look good and read more strongly, punchy, if you placed it as a pillar shape, one or a few words on each line Eg: Part/of being/a man/is/to be/ the/pillar/for a foundation/that is/people.

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you, you have a very good point. I will take that into consideration, and try it out.

[Circe]

much wisdom and reflection in these words... you are good at delivering a profound message in a few words, that's a great skill.

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you, some days I just... open my mouth or let my fingers go. =o