Serenity Released

Serenity Released

A Poem by ObscurityNone
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Severed individuality

Diced to two as whole

Looped and pulled, contracted

Distracted, by invisible serenity

Lying on the outside, perspective seem bold

Taking hold and portraying route

Futile appearance for unity is granted

Slanted but strait, and maybe narrow

Both in view and action

I believe, I believe, then you bleed, then you scream

Demented lament and, cemented filling

Drowned in Love you made her feel

Betrayed by the likes of that which is helpless

First serving done, go for another

A third does a charm and provides the release

F**k you, your Love, and lack there of

I’m better alone; you’re the ones in need of help.

© 2013 ObscurityNone


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The duality of love has gone top notch into this piece, it reminds me of love-hate relationship with yourself, a friend or Valentine's Day ... true love should be spontaneous, not being enforced and certainly not with us INT's! Brilliant hermanito!
As always.... :)

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Elis. x)

11 Years Ago

And you're the first who calls me Elis, I like that btw... it's how the Dutch call me too.... :D



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Such raw emotion! I love the detail, and see great potential. A well enjoyed poem ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Thanks.
Miranda Richard

11 Years Ago

Anytime, it was well deserved :)
haha.. nice, this is like taking a good beating to V-day and wiping your hands at the end. feels quite satisfying actually!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Thanks, my dear. x)
The duality of love has gone top notch into this piece, it reminds me of love-hate relationship with yourself, a friend or Valentine's Day ... true love should be spontaneous, not being enforced and certainly not with us INT's! Brilliant hermanito!
As always.... :)

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Elis. x)

11 Years Ago

And you're the first who calls me Elis, I like that btw... it's how the Dutch call me too.... :D
I like the justification of your muse, it's a very good blend of your right and left brain. I could feel the angst, but also the lightness of perspective witnessing the emotion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I wanted to give two opposite sides to Valentines Day.
Michael Kevin Spencer

11 Years Ago

Certainly it's like X-mas, people can get a bit depressed lol

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Added on February 14, 2013
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Tags: Poem, Poetry, V-Day

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