Snowfield

Passed. Lifting life to melting stars.

Wishes fade, so has fire.

Lost in the continuum of the numb.

One in the world of all.

White where magic bloomed.

Periwinkle washed frost, and

Heroes held static, while

Air struggles to breathe.

Beneath the statue prince

Tokened with fair delight

His offering to the falling.

Warm the abdicated,

Comfort her starless heart.

Last lips, her timeless saviour

Before accepting what’s left behind.

Cold caging chest.

Kneeling in glitter daggers

That cease when left alone,

The prince just stares.

Acceptance brought her justice

With soft flame on pale ears

His life blew into her world,

Shining, weeping glass moons,

Cerises through the paper land,

Exploding bleak and 

Scopes with no adventure.

Lights rise, and daggers

Haunt another world.

Princess, spread amongst the 

Spectrum of life, waits.

Shudder, quake,

Eyes her colour move.

Hat as her crown, she rose.

Saving her, he gazed.

Smiles played, and royals of

The snowfield married with a wish,

Stars bright and healed above,

Danced as time aged beyond

Periwinkle leaves. 

The prince twirled his lover

A cry of new dawn to the sky,

Blurring, water colour palette,

Melting once again, as the prince

Caught his love in his arms,

Her crown slipping without care.

Then.

Snow.

Awake, the princess blanked

And waits for years amongst the daggers.

Reviews

[hanir]

Well written!
Keep writing! 😊

[Lobster Goldberg]

Very well written. I love the subject matter and style. I think it might be a little long.. But I also have a short attention span. :)

[JenniferMarie]

Beautiful. I liked many word choices "periwinkle leaves." "White where magic bloomed."....I liked this poem. Thank you for sharing.

[Sami Khalil]

I like :
White where magic bloomed.
Nice write

[Antonio Valentino]

my gosh.. this was like short breaths all building up to a final exhale................

very lovely.. been loving the olympics in London.. this kind of went with all the pomp and pagentry..

wonderful
:)

[Eloha]

There is very delicate, elegant and epic, all qualities I would wish upon such poetic ambition my new friend!

It sometimes twirled in a way that I did not expect or see coming.