-Telephone Gears-

-Telephone Gears-

A Poem by OceanFire

Telephone wire, gears delete.

Memory shimmer, fears defeat.

Remember worth? Grammar attack.

Imagine wrong, midnight black.

~

Wasp flutter.

Ladybug mutter.

~

Lilac dream, remember me not.

Diary answers, violate rot.

Undercover secrets, hiding alines.

Autopsy require, reveal defines.

~

Character drag.

Experiment lag.

~

Spice read, reputation demise.

Observation discover, rumor lies.

Lies brodcast, Painful understand.

Friendship truth, helping hand.

~

Drama moth.

Judge cloth

~

Imagine wrong midnight black.

Remember worth? Grammar attack.

Wire telephone, delete gears.

Shimmer memory, defeat fears.

~

 


© 2011 OceanFire



Author's Note

OceanFire
This is the same format of my other poem -Elixar Breeze-

I've said this before in other poems, but I just want to make my mark on the world. I want to be rembered.

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love the rhmes of it all the way it was written adn how it flowed great ink

Posted 1 Year Ago


love the rhymes and the way you speak how you want to never be forgotten.

Posted 1 Year Ago


well i think it is a cool piece
the rhyme is not forced, rather it lends a certain power

"Lilac dream, remember me not.
Diary answers, violate rot."

like this one
great write

Posted 1 Year Ago


And you will be.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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BLOG: http://sunset-swirl.weebly.com/ Hello. I'm OceanFire. My real name is Jenna, but I prefer my penname. OceanFire. I am 12 and a girl, by the way. --- I love God more..

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