I Do wonder

Falling and love and not having the feelings returned

         I Do Wonder
 

I do wonder...... About all these feelings that I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... If these feelings will ever end Or if these thoughts of you will ever die I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile more To be able to hear your laughter-- all the time I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Author's Note

Please review and let me know what you think. This was very heartbreaking though.....

Reviews

[J.Black]

I loved is because it is EXACTLY how I am feeling at this moment. I wonder all the time. And it's heartbreaking when the other person, probably doesn't. Well done.

[Laranda]

Great piece!

[Brianna Brie]

I can relate. All that you said is true to my situation. Enjoyed reading this.

[MandaBear]

great poem

[qaralynn]

great poem!

[Narnie]

This would be nice with some font play - light colouring on the wondering and maybe slightly smaller size to get the flow but it does flow really well, backwards and forewards like a pendulum before the self-doubt stops it dead.

[Magdelena]

Many will relate to this. I like your style.. It is different and honest.. Interesting

Mags xx

[JanieB]

You have an unusal style to your writing. I like it Steve.

[Jasmine]

this is very simple, but appealing to a lot of readers who have experienced the same.