Shaking

Shaking

A Poem by Olivia Marie
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I feel the fog in my mind
it's passing down into my body
my eyesight blurring images
making it harder to walk in a straight line

I feel there's a numbness in my bones
and I could be sick with too much air
but I can't catch my breath
I can feel my heart wishing to grow cold

my thoughts are running together
I can't comprehend anything
everything is tangled with hints of hysteria
nothing is working the right way in my body

I ask to go to the bathroom
I look at those eyes
crazy, wild, painful, sickening eyes of a maniac
who's where they?

I feel the floor give in
on my back, I'm looking at the ceiling 
I can't force my weight up
I lay a twitching, shaking pile of rot on the floor

Then gravity kicks in, and I am standing again
and I remember I'm looking at the mirror
I'm trying to avoid eye contact
the girl in the mirror is painful to watch

I must wake up
I have to wake up

© 2012 Olivia Marie


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good job .....keep writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


through the journey of life we pass by various kind of problems,also we pass by people who send their hate in different ways.....but as u said lets wake up and i ll say lets do what does it take to make life saver

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow this is very moving great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 28, 2012
Last Updated on June 28, 2012
Tags: dark, shaking, fog, numb, wake up, sick

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Olivia Marie
Olivia Marie

Columbiana, AL



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My name's Olivia, I go to Shelby County High School, and I love to write. more..

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