Last Sound (Revised)A Poem by Olivia MarieI wrote this poem, and have now attempted to add details to it. :)
Thick crimson blood draining from right below my diaphragm
A thundering, excruciating, tormenting, pounding in my temple My knees crashing against the floor Sending a wave that burns along the inner rim of my knee cap My whole body shaking, and twitching Tsunamis of lightning agony Spreading throughout my body Covered in a dark, red sheet of blood My eyes blurring, and burning with tears The knife still lodged in my side I can feel the ridges of the blade tearing through my flesh My daughter standing a few feet away Starring with big innocent blue eyes Not understanding This image will haunt her for the rest of her life Her mother dying before her eyes I try to speak But my voice is trapped somewhere in my misery There's blood clogging in my throat, searing the edges Like I'm suffocating on death itself And everything is beginning to fade away into a layer of the subconscious I try to hold on But forces unknown won't let me Somewhere someone is screaming But even that begins to grow dull and silent The last sound I hear... Muffled in the background... ... "Mommy...?" ...but it's too late.
© 2012 Olivia MarieAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorOlivia MarieColumbiana, ALAboutMy name's Olivia, I go to Shelby County High School, and I love to write. more..Writing
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