In Love

In Love

A Poem by Dream Weaver
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With you, I am invincible, knowledgeable gracious endearing indestructible . Without you I'm vulnerable indecisive misplaced in a labyrinth of tedious deception.

With you, I have the courage of a hundred men courageous virtuous heroic victorious.

Without you, I cower in the shadows of a tumultuous hell, bending twisting whirling in a pool of despair.

With you, life is worth every precious breath, every waking moment impervious to failure.

Without you life truly does not exist! Emptiness reigns, overwhelming me to the point of despondency .

With you, every spectrum of passionate being revolves solely around you.

Without you, gray hues bleed irrational musings of an inconsolable loss.



© 2016 Dream Weaver



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The give and take of Love.

It's is nearly deadly.

Great write, and great capture of the feelings. I really love this!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dream Weaver

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jester, much appreciated... :)
I couldn't find any where else to comment but I enjoyed your music clip. You are really excellent with that guitar. Well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dream Weaver

2 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Lyn :)
Very well put, sincere and romantic, nice piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Its a very romantic piece of writing I enjoyed reading it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dream Weaver

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jenny, much appreciated...
Jenny Kort

2 Years Ago

You are Welcome
Joe, another awesome write, I loved the romance, the need for that person!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dream Weaver

3 Years Ago

Thank you Ms. Kathy :)
imagination101

3 Years Ago

My pleasure Mr. Joe:)
this is wonderful...with you, without you...a treat for a romantic...wonderful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love the contrast you have described, how the addition of love lightens the "grey hues" of life.. and adds "spectrum of passionate being" .. Really good.

Posted 6 Years Ago


love the image as I do this piece...love has that funny way of making everything look ever brighter. its magical and makes everything alive...beautifully romantic and so moving...

Posted 6 Years Ago


A great pairing between the verse and the picture. Your loves shines out strongly from the words and feel of your poem. Thanks!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


How can anyone be so in love? It's only something I can dream about. You must have true love in your life to be able to write this, or else you have the rare talent of being able to pluck your inspiration from thin air. :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Dream Weaver
Dream Weaver

Paradise, FL



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