With You

With you, I am invincible, knowledgeable.

Without you I'm vulnerable and indecisive

lost in a labyrinth of tedious  deception.

 

With you, I have the courage of a hundred

men standing strong, without you I cower

in the shadows of some horrendous hell.

 

With you, life is worth every precious

moment, without you life truly cannot

exist nor should it be so.

 

With you, every color has passion and

purpose, without you grey hues bleed

eternally disrupting my vision my love.

 

 

Reviews

[just is]

This is awesome,

Without you life truly does not exist! Emptiness reigns, overwhelming me to the point of despondency

love these lines here.

[Jester]

The give and take of Love.

It's is nearly deadly.

Great write, and great capture of the feelings. I really love this!

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Jester, much appreciated... :)

[Lyn Croker Paget]

I couldn't find any where else to comment but I enjoyed your music clip. You are really excellent with that guitar. Well done

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you kindly Lyn :)

[Jamestown]

Very well put, sincere and romantic, nice piece.

[Jenny Kort]

Its a very romantic piece of writing I enjoyed reading it

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Jenny, much appreciated...

[Jenny Kort]

You are Welcome

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Joe, another awesome write, I loved the romance, the need for that person!

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Ms. Kathy :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure Mr. Joe:)

[Sukriti Suki]

this is wonderful...with you, without you...a treat for a romantic...wonderful.

[My Fair Lady]

I love the contrast you have described, how the addition of love lightens the "grey hues" of life.. and adds "spectrum of passionate being" .. Really good.

[Ladysue]

love the image as I do this piece...love has that funny way of making everything look ever brighter. its magical and makes everything alive...beautifully romantic and so moving...

[Audrey Howitt]

A great pairing between the verse and the picture. Your loves shines out strongly from the words and feel of your poem. Thanks!!