My Luciérnaga

A poem I wrote for my wife in the first year of our joining. Enjoy.

I thought of her late last night as I stared up at the ceiling. It felt as if her heart skipped a beat as she saw me in a dream, and her smile found its way to my window; desperate to steal my gaze, though we were miles apart... I struggle to contain the passion she inspires, my due season in all its glory...

 "Sae Helu..", she whispered to me. Her head against my chest... How could I deny her entry, when she had already begun to reconstruct the fallen kingdom all those years ago?... "My vision of perfection was never so broad, dear love..."

 The gift of majesty came with your grace, and enveloped all that surrounded in a lingering veil of brilliance; leaving my mind in a state of awe as you had always done. Never have I had such power at my fingertips... My luciérnaga, tiene una luz que nunca y sin embargo desapareció... Lead me in the night...

Author's Note

Constructive criticism always welcomed..

Reviews

[Shirlena]

Sexy and romantic, the ending in another language is superb bringing this write home...the way you described her being with you yet not is haunting. You brought are noses close up to the window of your romance and we are privileged that you allowed us to peer.

[K.N. Lorenzen]

Me encanta este poema de amor verdadero! Yo puedo sentir la sensibilidad entre vosotros. Una dedicación marvillosa :)

Gracias por la invitaci�™n a leer!

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful write to her. It shows how much you cherished her...Bravo................