Why Can't You See?

Please just tell me why.

Why can't you see?

You've always been there

Right in front of me.

Why can't you see me

Trying to win your love.

Never fitting your hand

Like a beautiful glove.

Your perfect in every way

Like you we made just for me.

I know I’m not perfect

But why cant you see?

Everyday I look and wander,

How can it be?

Why can't you see

That you are perfect for me?

 

 

Reviews

[Shayne Plunk]

I really like this one, Liz. It shows just what kind of sadness one can experience when in love. Unrequited love is perhaps one of the most powerful kinds.

[fallendemonofmercy]

this is quite true and unfortunate that other lover can't see it as well
congrats in the contest

[Lady leah]

Very nicely penned write.