Outcast

Outcast

A Poem by OtakuXC
"

Venting I suppose? I'm fine now of course.

"
She hates how she looks.
As well as her eyes.
Everyone around, they feel like spies.
Get away, her distance is clear.
Showing hatred and fear.
Can you see her sorrow, or into her soul?
Her heart, a black, darkened hole;
Could you look through that crooked smile, and onto the next mile?
Or maybe she'd rather lie...

© 2011 OtakuXC


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u ok?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice rhyming and the pattern is quite sharp...keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on August 23, 2011
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OtakuXC
OtakuXC

Nashua, NH



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I'll go by the name Linz. I'm really into cross country running, soccer, and art. Poetry is there too, though it's just for fun. I adore music as well, mainly these bands: Rise Against, D.R.U.G.S, .. more..

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