Sparrows

 

I heard my sparrow sing when it saw you today

The day that rained cold drops inspiring poems across the town

My sparrow flew through it

I heard it sing

Singing, singing in the rain

I hope the other birds do not block my sparrows flight

But most of all I hope your sparrow never dies

Reviews

[Travis Lawrence]

Good use of repetition, you are very talented for your age. Favorite line:

"The day that rained cold drops inspiring poems across the town"

[Emily B]

Wow! This is different and intriguing. I like it.