Snow White

Encased in delusion

Hidden in plain sight

Lips fuse

Bodies entwine

Existence a phantasm 

No departure or escape

Tainted long ago 

by the illusion of you

Reviews

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there's no escape from this glass coffin...deluded and tainted love make it difficult to imagine the possibility of ever experiencing that 'fairytale' existence...nicely-done, Pandora

[An owl on the moon]

Loved the dark flow of your thoughts. These beautiful illusions ripple and flow through the mind and heart.

[PANDORA]

I have been working on writing short pieces inspired by others who do it so well.

Thank you for reading :-)

[An owl on the moon]

You always inspire, dear poet. :)

[JoeM]

I think I understand your poem to some degree, Pandora. However, I like the playing with words.

[PANDORA]

It can mean something different to everyone so understanding is not the ultimate goal. Sometimes I don't even understand what I am writing :-)

thanks for reading

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. Each line leading reader to different place and thoughts. The tainted illusion. Does it become acceptable? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[PANDORA]

Thank you. Writing a short piece is not my strong suit so I struggled with the right words to express the trapped feeling. I am glad you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.