#1- Thinking about Midnight.

#1- Thinking about Midnight.

A Poem by Paper
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April Fool's Day. And doesn't it feel appropriate?

"

Just months ago

I’d lie in bed, hang up the phone.

And know

You were out there,

Somewhere

Thinking about me, too

 

But now, tonight

I look at the clock

And cry.

Knowing you’re probably with Him.

Somewhere.

Arms and legs a-tangle.

 

And at the moment,

As He works His spell

On you.

In you.

I couldn’t possibly be 

Further from your thoughts, Miss.


© 2017 Paper



Author's Note

Paper
I'm new to poetry. But someone special to me really likes it. And for whatever reason, I thought I'd give it a try. Sounds pathetic, explaining it like that.

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well, let me say nice try and success!!! I read part of a comment you left for Jacob in one of his poems and you mentioned you played jazz, now I am sure you did not just pick up your instrument and start to play.. but struggled with music and as you practiced you became more proficient and better... this is also the way most poets do it as well... reading as much poetry as possible and writing until your fingers drop off and even then you will think I am just a newbie at this poetry thing.. at least that is what I think of my writing..

but having said this, you picked a good name, "paper"... paper allows many things to be written on it and this poem, while pulling at heart strings with emotion, is well deserved to have paper accept it...

I hope that this "someone special has seen your writing...

redzone

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paper

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much!

But to be honest, I'm pretty torn as to whether I want her to f.. read more



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a very touching peace
you know how it goes
if you think of someone they are thinking of you
but the mind has a place of its own
making up the worst

really like your style

Posted 6 Months Ago


Great poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paper

8 Months Ago

Thank you.
Alice Maria

8 Months Ago

You're welcome.
Wow. This hits at home! Good job!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Paper

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much!
First time I've attempted poetry as an adult, and I'm pretty proud of .. read more
well, let me say nice try and success!!! I read part of a comment you left for Jacob in one of his poems and you mentioned you played jazz, now I am sure you did not just pick up your instrument and start to play.. but struggled with music and as you practiced you became more proficient and better... this is also the way most poets do it as well... reading as much poetry as possible and writing until your fingers drop off and even then you will think I am just a newbie at this poetry thing.. at least that is what I think of my writing..

but having said this, you picked a good name, "paper"... paper allows many things to be written on it and this poem, while pulling at heart strings with emotion, is well deserved to have paper accept it...

I hope that this "someone special has seen your writing...

redzone

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paper

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much!

But to be honest, I'm pretty torn as to whether I want her to f.. read more
We all get troubles wit love. Someone can survive, and someone dont. Your poem is very realistic and keep some kind of beauty. This is good writing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a very heavy piece with a lot of emotion. I'm guessing it was very cathartic to write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paper

8 Months Ago

It was. Very much. Yes.

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Tags: depression, relationships, heartache, loneliness, love, romance, sex

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I'm 50% hoping That you find this, Someday, Miss. And 50% hoping That you never do. That you never know the truth. And all the feelings And thoughts I'll Never Directly Tell you.... more..

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