HER WORST REALITY

 LIKE A CAVEMAN SHE SITS

SHE SITS AND CLEARS HER THROUGHT TO TALK,

TALK OF WHAT?

SOMETHING ALREADY SAID OF PAINS ALREADY FELT

BUT THE QUESTION IS WILL TALKING HELP

FOR THIS DEMON RESIDES INSIDE HER HEAD IT'S LIKE LIFE IT'S LIKE SELF

CUNNING, CONIVING

F**K IT'S LIKE ALL THESE PEOPLE ARE CONSPIERING, AGAINST HER

 

SHE CLEAR HER THROUGHT AND HOPES THAT BLOOD DOES'NT COME OUT

LIKE T.B INFECTED PATIENTS FOR

SHE ALSO HAS PROBLEMS OF THE LUNGS THERE IS SO MUCH BOTTLED UP ANGER

SHE WALKS AROUND LIKE A TICKING TIME BOMB TICK TOCK

SO MUCH EMOTION IT COULD FUEL A LOCOMOTIVE

BUT TODAY TODAY SHE SHALL SPEAK

 

SHE CLEARS HER THROUGHT AND LOOKS AT YOU

DIGS INTO HER MIND TO REMOVE THE PROFANITY

SHE RUBS HER EYES NOT SO TO SEE CLEARLY BUT TO HIDE THE TEARS

THE TEARS THAT ARE FORMING

SHE LOOKS DOWN NOT BECOUSE SHE IS SHY NO BECOUSE SEING YOU WOULD ONLY BRING HER  NIGHTMAREZ  

SHE CLEAR HER THROUGHT

 

SHE CLEAR HER THROUGHT AND HASITATES

CATCHES HER BREATH AND SAYS

WHY??????

WHY DO YOU DO THE THINGZ YOU DO

WHY IS IT YOU COUSE SO MUCH PAIN IN MY LIFE

AND EVERYONE IN GENERAL

 

SHE CLEARS HER THROUGHT

AND SHE GET A LITTLE BRAVER 

YOU "B*****D" OOPS IT SLIPPED OUT

SHE PROMISED HERSELF THAT THERE WOULD BE NO BLASPHAMY

SHE LOOKS UP AND SEES YOUR EVIL STARE

 

SHE CLEAR HER THROUGHT

AND PREPARES TO DIE FOR THE TRUTH

"AS MY FATHER'S COFFIN WENT 6 FEET THEY

BARIED MY HAPPINESS ALONG WITH HIM" SHE TELLS HIM

 

SHE CLEARS HER -WAIT HER THROUGHT IS CLEAR

SO SHE CONTINIUES YOU ARE NOT MY FATHER SO

SO WHY OVER ME YOU HAVE THIS POWER WELL I HATE YOU

I AM ASHAIMED TO CALL YOU MY

BROTHER.

Reviews

[Katelyn]

well written poem. good job

[PROPAGANDIST]

Thank you for your review
this peice is a second version and i changed alot of things and as you pointed out forgot alot but your critisism is much appreciated none the less

[Cassie Holloway]

Interesting. Is this pre-thought out or you just begin to write and out it comes? It was decent at the very least. Many spelling errors but that's okay. Keep up the good work.

[gothicchica]

i loooved it i kinda understand but not fully thought it was realy good