One Breath- Haiku

One Breath- Haiku

A Poem by Pakino

 

One moment one breath

The wind of the moment strikes

Fate has no mercy

© 2008 Pakino


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Pakino
Poem of seizing the moment. A kendo idea of taking the initiative at the right time.

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Powerful, captures the essence of the moment...could be when life springs forth, death arrives, a loving moment or battle. Kudos!

Posted 15 Years Ago


When I read it I thought of striking at the right time in a battle, guess that shows how violence flows through my mind.

I like it, people can interpret it differently and it still holds the same meaning no matter how it is interpreted.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Pakino
Pakino

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